Given charts explains about the consumption of water by three different countries for various purposes in 2000. First chart shows the world average and the later explains the countrywise usage.
Overall, both China and India are the largest users of water for agriculture purpose while Canada used the major portion for industrial area.On the other hand New Zeland shares almost equal proportion for agricultural and domestic use.
Firstly in case of India and China water used for agricultural purposes, 92 and 69 percentage, respectively. Both these countries consumed little water for domestic purpose but China took more water for industrial when compared to india.
Secondly, when considering Canada, they used the lion portion of water for industrial puropose and the other sectors accounts very less amount only. New Zeland witnessed a balanced use of water for agricultural and domestic use but industrial consumption was poor.
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 61
- Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own option. 78
- ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF TECHNOLOGY 22
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 11
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...d the major portion for industrial area.On the other hand New Zeland shares almost...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48965517241 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68537236384 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9618297712 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126182324701 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760239409143 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417610767929 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902378630434 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306974765139 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.