The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and repairing the main features and make comparisons
The two bar charts compare the age group of men and women when getting married in a nation in two separated years 1996 an 2008. Overall, there was an decrease in the number of married individuals under 30 years old when compared with 1996. It is also clearly seen that the age from 25 to 29 is the most ideal for both male and female to start the family.
As presented in the chart, the percentage of both genders who got married in two age groups 16-19 and 20-14 in 2008 declined slightly compared with 1996. The age from 16-19 accounted for the smallest proportion with nearly 1% of female, in particularly, no men got married at under 20 years old. The total of people who married in 20-24 age group had down trend from 6% to 3% with female of both genders had tendency to embark the family in 25-29 age group.
In terms of older group, a substantial rise was witnessed in the proportion of 30-34 years old which made up 7% for females and 9% for males in 1996, in comparison with 8% and 11% appropriately. For people aged above 35, the proportion of married women fluctuated around 4% and 2% while the percentage of men was as twice as the women
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- 2.Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believes that people need to live simple lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and g 73
- 5.Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the cours 78
- In some countries more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally Why do people buy imported food What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37674418605 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38621423772 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4066920318 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.625 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167170775447 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863354720848 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436539264103 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120542613244 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317162324453 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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