The given pie charts illustrate the average consumption of sodium, saturated fats and add sugar in four main meals in the United States, the over-consumption of which may have a detrimental effect on health.
In details, American dinner and lunch seem to concentrate more in sodium and saturated fats. 43% of sodium and 37% of fats is found in dinner dishes, which is a greatest percentage compared to other meals, while there is only more than a fifth of added sugar that dinner provides. Similar to dinner, in lunch, people consume sodium most, at 29%, second is fats at 26% and final is sugar at 16%.
Breakfast and snacks are considered as less suplement-supply, which is revealed by the noticeably fewer percentages in all pie charts. Added sugar, as a nutrition isn’t been focused in other meals, occupies nearly a half in snacks, but only 16% in breakfast. Sodium contained in both meals accounts for 14% each, whereas the former meal is richer in saturated fat than the latter one, with 21% and 16% respectively.
Overall, American intake a lot of sodium and saturated fats in dinner and lunch, which might be harmful for their health if they consume too much. Their lunches are less salty and fat, but they provide a great amount of added sugar, while breakfast is the least nutrition meal in a day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81497797357 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65916599908 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5261092285 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103377655264 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455324325056 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434766272948 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733789671919 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371406040632 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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