The pie charts below depict the mean percentages of three main nutrients in Americans' regular meals, which may cause health problems if consumed excessively. Overall, it is readily apparent that Sodium and Saturated fat are mostly eaten during Dinner, while Added Sugar is mainly ingested during Snacks
In detail, both Sodium and Saturated fat are mainly consumed during Dinner, at 43% and 37%, respectively. Next, Sodium and Saturated fat are mostly found in Americans' Lunch, at 29% and 26%, consecutively. After that, Americans mostly ate Sodium during both Breakfast and Snacks, which had tied percentages, at 14%. Next, the least Saturated fat could be found at Americans' Snacks and Breakfast, which contained 21% and 16% of Saturated fat, respectively.
Meanwhile, Added Sugar is mostly eaten by Americans during Snacks, which contributed 42%. Following Snacks is Dinner, which had more than a half of Snacks' Added Sugar percentages, 23%. Lastly, Added Sugar was least consumed during Lunch and Breakfast, at 19% and 16%, consecutively.
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- the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d Sugar is mainly ingested during Snacks In detail, both Sodium and Saturated fat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43558282209 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75218853991 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1007137667 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960955436467 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513855156804 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642195345607 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849646136099 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662954516519 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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