The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie-charts highlight, an average, of different meals ingredients, which can tend to effect health if over-eaten. Presentation of charts is on percentage basis.

Overall, it is obvious that adding sugar to the snack meal causes the highest damage to our bodies which is 42%, however, the addition of sodium to dinner gives as near as the addition of saturated fat to both breakfast and lunch combined which is 44% of health effect.

In one hand, if considering analyzing data for breakfast and snack meals, adding sugar takes the peak of harming health by a percentage 42 when being added to snack, while sodium causes the lowest effect with only 14%, when, saturated fat causes as half as the unhealthy effect of sugar when added snack. Furthermore, all three ingredients cause as equal as to each other when added to breakfast, with a range of percentages between 14 and 16%.

In other hand, the charts prove a valued information about addition of the three additives to lunch and dinner. When concentrating on dinner, it is clearly that sodium causes the highest effect on health when added, while saturated fat takes the second place with 37%, turning over to sugar which almost reason of quarter of damage when added to the same meal. However, adding sodium, saturated fat, and sugar to lunch can lead to harmful effects on percentage of 29%, 26%, and 19% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tage of 29%, 26%, and 19% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358974359 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59141084804 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0476888281 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.375 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106949111847 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671163336153 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328739682054 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829522714715 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382884780237 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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