The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.
The given charts detail the information on water distribution at the world level. The pie charts describe the proportion of freshwater globally along with its distribution from different channels. The bar chart represents proportional usage of water in Egypt, Canada, and Saudi Arabia for agriculture, domestic, and industrial purposes respectively.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the freshwater, which constitutes the least of the total water on the mother earth, is used for agriculture at the highest rate in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, while Canada's main sector is Industry.
According to the given illustration, only 3% of the world's water is freshwater. Although ground, surface, and glaciers act as main resources of the freshwater, about 79% of the total is directed from ice and glaciers only.
On the other hand, in terms of usage of freshwater, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia show a similar trend. The largest proportion( 80%, 75%) is invested in agriculture as against only 12% in domestic and below 10% in the industry for the respective countries. However, a reverse trend can be witnessed in Canada, where the industrial sector absorbs the maximum share (80% of total water), while 12% in domestic and least portion of 8% in the agriculture sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s distribution from different channels. The bar chart represents proportional usage...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of 8% in the agriculture sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28985507246 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92603714748 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574879227053 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3757088966 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241548250676 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109503788365 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094066712568 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136602615642 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772025891992 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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