The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places that are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the advent of Globalization, it is seen that countries are investing a large proportion of their budget in order to promote tourism. It is believed by many people that extension in this industry has proved to be a boon in the overall growth of any country, while many others contradict this view highlighting that tourism hardly shares any beneficial contribution with the community. I am in discord with the given statement and think that despite some shortcomings, tourism has an indispensable addition in the country's betterment which can never be overlooked.
The most important reason is the growth of the service sector. Most of the businesses such as hotels, airlines, road transportation, and many more are indirectly related to the tourism industry, as a result, gains a lot with the growth of the number of tourists. In addition, the accumulated foreign funds help in improving the country's infrastructure and facilities. Apart from this, tourism strengthens international ties and enhances trade opportunities. For example, foreign import and export trading gets a strong boost leading to colossal profits.
The second reason is the dramatic rise in the GDP of a country, which in turn leads to economic growth. Moreover, tourism opens up numerous employment opportunities especially for the local community in developing countries. For instance, local people get a chance to display their talent in the form of cultural dances, authentic foods, and traditional goods. Furthermore, a healthy exchange of local cultures promotes the country's rich historic heritage. Hence, it is an undeniable fact that tourism plays a vital role in the upliftment of the status of a country.
To conclude, there are few risks associated with the expansion of tourism like low wages due to its seasonal dependency, the impact of rise in inflation on local products, traffic congestion. So, it is often argued that promoting the tourism market is not of much support. However, in my opinion, the Government should take the necessary steps to enhance the growth of the tourism industry because of its stupendous efficacy in raising the standard of a country at global levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32471264368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02202002536 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600574712644 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4436825914 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1598061751 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499065117741 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307855031998 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961348050885 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287176934244 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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