The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the name of activities of each grades and the pie chart below illustrates how much fund each grade raised at the King Primary School’s event. Most of grades contributed more than 10% of the total fund except the third graded 's Book Sale activity. The highest earnings was came from the Dance Contest organized by the first grade.
To look at the pie chart closely, the top fund raising was from first grade's Dance Contest which earned 23.7 % of the total money raised at the event. The second grade's Cake Decorating Contest was the second highest contribution which was 20% of the total. The fifth grade's Cookie Sale marked as the third rank and it was 18.3% of the sum of the earnings. Soccer Skill Contest run by the sixth grade and Art Sale organized by fourth grade were less popular which were 15.5% and 13.9% of the total respectively. The worst sales was from the third grade's Book Sale and it was nearly 1/3 of the sales of first grade's Dance Contest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the grades') or simply say ''Most grades''.
Suggestion: Most of the grades; Most grades
...t the King Primary School's event. Most of grades contributed more than 10% of the total ...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...Sale activity. The highest earnings was came from the Dance Contest organized by the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59659090909 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18884085547 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505681818182 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8836869872 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19914981278 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100584545818 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088319058921 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198787354702 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890789810505 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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