The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

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The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar chart compares the percentage of men and women watched the different types of film, while the pie chart shows the demand of movie tickets in the USA during the year 2010. In general, the men enjoyed spending their time on watching movies than the women and the action movie was most popular among audience than other kinds of films. Overall, male audience liked to watch action movie and then romantic comedy was popular among the female group. On the sales of tickets, other types of film were least interested among movie lover while action movie taken the first place in the list.
In detail, what stands out from the graph is that the rate of watching comedy and western movie in both genders was the same, at 20% and 10% respectively. The action movie in male audience was two times more popular than comedy film with 40%. The romantic movie took the first place among the female audience with 30%.
The most interesting point from the sales on movie ticket is that action film was obviously dominant on other types of movies and it took almost the half of percentage in movie industry. The comedy movie followed by the action movie with 24% and the remaining types of films (romantic comedy, thriller and other) taken 27% in the chart.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce among the female audience with 30%. The most interesting point from the sales o...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e half of percentage in movie industry. The comedy movie followed by the action mov...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iller and other taken 27% in the chart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66515837104 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0348109899 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475113122172 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6154524487 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207227505578 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106523129621 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104269795414 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150929644382 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863846571268 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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