the charts below show the number and types of books bought by men and women and four different age groups in the uk
the charts give information about the types of books that British men and women and different age groups buy. the initial impression from the charts is that women tend to buy more books than men overall. Although they buy slightly fewer non-fiction books. the people that buy the most books are in the 45+ age group.
Nearly 60% of women buy fiction, which is almost twice as many as the number of men who choose this type of book. Nevertheless, most age groups buy more fiction books than non-fiction ones showing that non-fiction is generally less popular than fiction.
the number of people buying fiction increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the lowest number of books, at just over 40% of the age group, bought by 16 to 24 years old and the highest number, at just over 50%, bought by over 45 s.
however, the pattern is different for no-fiction. the number of books bought by 25 to 44 years old is significantly much far than the number bought by 16 to 24 years old and those over 45. just over 40% of 16 to 24 years old buy non-fiction, but this number is not as high as the number of people aged 45 and over buying non-fiction, at nearly 60%. only 31% of 35 to 44 years old buy non-fiction, and the number of 25 to 34 years old is as lower at 28%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34033613445 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37015387785 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449579831933 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3992635893 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28308972609 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142974158749 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11014860671 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201024726282 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784305448018 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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