The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by di erent sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010

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The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.

The pie charts provide information about the consumption of electricity by various sectors in Eastern Australia between the years 2007 and 2010. The data is in the percentage.

Overall, it is seen clearly from given both pie graphs that the residential sector used the most electricity, whereas the transport sector was at the last place in this list throughout the given period.

To comments with, as regards the residential sector, accounted for 28% in the year 2007, which remained the same in the year 2010. Moreover, the commercial, agriculture, and mining sectors comprised 23%, 2%, and 9% in both years respectively. However, transport remained at the last position in this category with 1% throughout the time.

Furthermore, the proportion of manufacturing and aluminum sectors was around 13% in 2007, a decline of 4% for manufacturing and 11% for the aluminum sector accounted by 2010. Lastly, the initial figure of other metals comprised 12% in the beginning, and 6% of increment was observed in the end in Eastern Australia.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, whereas, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22023809524 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97137109796 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7914887557 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229545436347 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094750714336 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101407459142 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151853292467 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985878099771 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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