The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010.
The provided pie charts compare the percentages of workers of three different job departments in two unspecific towns A and B in 1960 and 2010.
Overall, Manufacturing was seen as the dominant major sector in both towns in 1960. However, over half a century, while it was still remained as the most popular employment in town B, service-related jobs overtook manufacturing in town A.
In 1960, 41% of the total workers in town A chose to work as manufacturers while there was a nearly equal percentage of employees working for the sales department (29%) and service-related jobs (30%). After 50 years, while people who choose to work for the service field experienced a substantial rise to 64%, becoming the most popular sector, the percentage of workers in manufacturing and sales approximately halved to 20% and 16% respectively.
Similar to town A, Manufacturing attracted the highest proportion of workers in town B in the year of 1960 which was accounted for 70% of employees. Only 20% of people were employed in the sales department which was twice as much as that of service-related jobs (10%). In 2010, the figure for service workers dramatically rose to 25% which was equivalent to a quarter of the total employees. While there was also a mild increase of 2% in the proportion of those working for sales department, there was a gradual drop of 17% in the fraction of manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93191489362 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18016715056 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3949724659 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.777777778 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29898254094 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143066578482 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947030593014 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219361472484 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727113535467 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.