The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.
The two pie charts gives information about the proportion of students who enrolled in North West University.
Overall, it can be seen that the most adorable faulty was arts whereas, medicine was the least. The majority of non-American pupils in the faculty of arts were South American which were more than three quarters while Africans were less.
The majority of new comers have joined the department of arts which was almost a quarter. It was followed by the computing and science with 22% and 21% respectively. 14% students have signup in the faculty of the business. While, the remaining fields (engineering, medicine and law) have captured much fewer attraction of the students with an average of almost 10%.
Students of arts were from South America which were 79%. After that the Europeans who joined arts faculty were almost a quarter. Only 6% of Asian students have joined the department of arts. The students from Australia were double of the Africans which was 4%. The lowest number (2%) of students were from Africa who take admission in arts.
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- Some people think that paying tax is their only duty while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
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- Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding while others think it is a waste of money What is your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...were from South America which were 79%. After that the Europeans who joined arts facu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97175141243 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50653969252 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2030090987 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144891995271 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649111012172 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628620231442 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105641458756 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834791069632 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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