Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary era, all the members of society are connected with the internet. There are some people who use social media as source of information of updated program of news and to meet with friends. From my point of view, it has more demerits than merits.
There are several reasons that social media has drawbacks. Firstly, news given on the social are not 100 percent accurate. They can add their own points which can create a confusion in the society which might lead to strikes. Furthermore, most of the people are making their own social media channels to give updated news to the public but these channels can be hacked with an ease and the given news can be transformed to new conversation. Secondly, they can also upload an information which might be related to the topic of the news which can waste plethora of precious juncture. For instance, according, to my experience one day I was searching for a news on YouTube as I searched there were a lot of videos but none of them according the topic which I had given.
Thirdly, communicating people with the internet may not be that much efficient despite of one to one talk. You cannot express your feelings neither you can convey your words in the manner you want. For example, if you want to show your grief with a best friend so, it would be hard for him to understand your appearance. Finally, it can also damage some parts of the body. Spending a lot of time on media can harm your eyes sight with blue rays as well as it can damage your brains by taking a lot of friends at one time on internet.
In conclusion, it might have some positive aspect but, from point of view, the negative aspect is more than positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... experience one day I was searching for a news on YouTube as I searched there were a l...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...le, if you want to show your grief with a best friend so, it would be hard for hi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52786885246 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44563792364 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6645713815 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186448048975 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706704755123 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073794801059 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115374034486 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656152595215 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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