The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts represent the use of water in different areas of the world for different purposes. As can be seen from the charts, in Europe most of the water is used for industrial purposes, 53%. In terms of industrials usage, North America is in the second position, with 48% water used in industry. The other regions of the world use small proportion of water in industrial purposes, as compared to Europe and North America. Central Asia uses the least percentage of water in industry, which is only 5% and then there is Africa, with 7% water used in industry. The rest of the areas’ water usage in industry roughly fall in the same trend.
In terms of agricultural usage, Central Asia uses most of its’ water for this purpose, namely 88%. Africa and Southeast Asia follows almost the same fashion, 84% and 81% respectively. As can be seen from the charts, the other regions also use a substantial proportion of water in agricultural purpose,with North America, South America and Europe using 13%, 71% and 32% of their water respectively in agriculture.
Domestic use is the least in every regions. Among these regions, South America uses the most fraction of its’ water for domestic purpose, followed by Europe, with 15%. Then there is North America, with 13%. The other areas’ water usage in domestic purpose fall roughly in the same region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94372294372 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63665861769 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458874458874 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5259858171 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314519776895 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132713166027 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115245681612 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216615374102 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968998299654 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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