The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the water usage for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in six distinct areas, namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.

It is noticeable that more water is consumed by industry than by agriculture or households in North America and Europe. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used in those 4 remaining areas.

In North America and Europe, industrial water consumption accounts for 48% and 53% of total water usage. By contrast, merely 10%, 7%, 5% and 12% of the water used of South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia go to industry respectively. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive of more than two thirds of the water usage in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, but only 39% and 32% of the water used in the other two areas.

Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for household's water usage. The proportion of water, which is higher than 10%, belongs to North America (13%), South America (19%) and Europe (15%). Moreover, the same proportion of water is recorded in Central Asia and South East Asia (7%), while the figure for Africa is 2% higher, at 9%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90178571429 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54674098965 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4366987102 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140978616182 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740106557328 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320568837258 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104716768104 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148475532318 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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