The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts represent the amount of water used in a percentage for three different purposes, namely; industrial, agriculture and domestic in four continents; America, Asia, Europe and Africa.
Overall, Asians used the most of water for agriculture as well as Africa and South America while North America and Europe used the water mainly for the industrial purposes.
Most of countries in the world used the water mostly for agricultural purposes. Central Asia used the majority of their water for agricultural purposes of 88%, followed by Africa of 84%, South East Asia of 81% and last of South America of 71%. The rest of countries (Europe and North America) had about 32% and 239% water used for the same reason, respectively.
In contrast, those developed countries (North America and Europe) spent the majority of water for industrial use as which recorded at 46% and 53% respectively in compared to about 5% for Central Asia continents, 7% for Africa and over 10% for South America and South East Asia. Domestic use was the least popular usage for all countries as its usage was recorded at below 15%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the countries') or simply say ''Most countries''.
Suggestion: Most of the countries; Most countries
...er mainly for the industrial purposes. Most of countries in the world used the water mostly for ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in contrast', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.361111111111 0.268076937826 135% => OK
Verbs: 0.0694444444444 0.116061578633 60% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694444444444 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0366838410393 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00925925925926 0.0131127313244 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.166666666667 0.155750635184 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0231481481481 0.0379272487307 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60803948936 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00462962962963 0.0210936926555 22% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0694444444444 0.0948980150116 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00462962962963 0.00967000014798 48% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1104.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96756756757 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313513513514 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248648648649 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183783783784 0.171178102325 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124324324324 0.112407865282 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60803948936 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.375416472 49.3433353143 82% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4285714286 23.0094962315 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2439084851 42.9750493124 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.714285714 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.0094962315 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.2934362934 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 4.57692307692 2.94281807926 156% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492589295946 0.418131533498 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.283634349632 0.181151798455 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861795268452 0.0850326197045 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.787621401335 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169785191809 0.157042692854 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.328371195501 0.228904883108 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138345438697 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.465056428584 0.367819155151 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0557334166417 0.0812612215331 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378039463381 0.316326947829 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113089147595 0.0921553760075 123% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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