the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given pie charts clearly present information about the proportion of water used for 3 different purposes including industry, agriculture, and domestic use, in 6 areas in the world. Overall, it is evident that there were 4 areas using water for agriculture and 2 areas using water for industry.
In detail, it can be explained that the purpose of using water for agriculture was accounted for the highest in 4 areas including Central Asia(88%), Africa(84%), South Asia(81%), and South America(71%). One the other hand, the amount of water used for domestic in Africa was almost similar to that in 3 other areas, or at 8% on average. Similarly, the amount of water used of industry in 4 mentioned areas, or at 10% on average.
Finally, it is interesting that the water using for industry was considered the highest in North America and Europe because the amount of water used for industry in North America was almost a half of total water used(48%), while that in Europe was over a half of water used, or at 53%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lf of total water used48%, while that in Europe was over a half of water used, or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62314845169 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482954545455 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9159604481 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382730276789 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223739843547 0.103423049105 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112514813912 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286638420411 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130988058421 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.