The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by mk2018 on Wed, 04/18/2018 - 06:45

The following piecharts depict the percentage consumption of the water in four countries in six different regions.

Overall, it is clear that the agriculture occupies the most of the piechart in four areas like Africa, Central and South Asia; South America whereas the domestic use scores the least percentage in most countries except for Africa, Central Asia and South America.

As it is shown, the two parts of Asia directed the largest proportion of their water supply towards agriculture which accounted for more than four-fifths of the two piecharts collectively. In contrast, the industry uses only less than fifth of the country,’s water supply. On the other hand, the use of water in domestic purposes remains constant in both parts of Asia at a mere 7 percent.

In spite of using one in ten of America’s supply in industry which is for South America, the industry scores 48% in North America which is approximately three times the percentage found in South America. However, when looking at the domestic use, it only occupies nearly a fifth of the piechart of South America’s water usage while less than a fifth in North America. Furthermore, more than half of Europe’s water supply is directed towards industry and almost a third towards farming and only 15% in domestic use.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...uses only less than fifth of the country,'s water supply. On the other hand, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, third, whereas, while, except for, in contrast, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85967468754 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479069767442 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4379020453 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.23603664747 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133869688275 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073100691048 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326223571986 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980257471958 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253408004291 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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