The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of water consumption for various purpose in six different locations of the world.
Overall, the majority of water is used for agriculture in the areas such as South America, Africa, South East Asia and Central Asia. In North America and South America, more percentage of water used for industrial purpose. It appears that, water used for domestic purpose is less than 20 percentage in all the six locations.
The majority of water used for agriculture purpose is in Central Asia, which is 88%, while the least consumption of water agricultural purpose is in Europe, which is 32%. The major consumption of water for industrial purpose is in Europe, which is 53% and the least amount of water for industrial purpose is in central Asia with 5%. The majority of water used for domestic purpose in South America, which is 19% and the least usage for domestic purpose is in both Central Asia and South East Asia, which is 7%.
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56925382114 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381818181818 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8657899859 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262536621109 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169909710164 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668703870438 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233219732264 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062398616472 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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