Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern world, nowadays, some people debate that subjects like science and technology should be prioritized compared to History subject, while others claim that, History is one of the key subject to be considered. I believe that Science and Technology subject to be preferred over History whilst History subject should not be completely ignored.
History is taught to the students since Grade 2 in some countries. This is very helpful for the children to know about the past of the country and they can understand about the cultural heritage shared by their ancestors. It is important that the historical information should be preserved, which will be useful for the future as well. For instance, my grandmother knows some home remedies and those can be used for mild sicknesses. Such information is valuable and even nowadays this can be used rather than visiting the Doctor. However, these are records and temporary solutions, in this challenging world, more obstacles can be negated only through advancement in Science and Technology.
Science and Technology is essential in this current world. And there are diversified fields for the children to pioneer further. Some of the global threats can be addressed only through the advanced science and technology. For instance, global warning or any uncurable disease at the moments can only be solved through the development in science and technology. It is
obvious that world has enormous hazards could handled only through abundant exploration in the science and technologies.
In conclusion, for looking back at the past, history is required while we are marching towards the future, undoubtedly, science and technology should be the most focused for the children in school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion:
...lopment in science and technology. It is obvious that world has enormous hazards ...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'handle'
Suggestion: handle
...s that world has enormous hazards could handled only through abundant exploration in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32971014493 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78883615875 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.580465819 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205778474072 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773134420379 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593006205128 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117452507621 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601934604129 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.