The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The graphs depict the comparison of the portion of the different type of water consumption in six regionals in the globe counted in percentage
At a glance we can see that there are three main purposes of water in all regions, which the largest proportion is the agricultural purposing, while the industrial use of water is the smallest proportion in most areas.
Central Asia, Africa and Southeast Asia the three greatest area which consumes water for agricultural use with 88%, 84% and 81%, respectively, while South America is below of them at 71%. In the northern area, such as North America and Europe only range between 30-40%.
Regarding domestic use of water, South America’s consumption is nearly 20% which is the highest level in all areas, while 10-15% is only fulfilled by two areas, North America and Europe. Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia are only below 10%.
- International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. 73
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USAbetween 1920 and 2000. 56
- The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of thistechnology has been positive. 84
- Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 90
- Travelling 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06081081081 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68748248164 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.860279992 43.030603864 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.8 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229689935692 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106529764796 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707438464162 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136878000352 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441534524902 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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