Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
several people think that people who visit some places should adopt with the local culture by using their clothes, customs, and also following their behavior. Other consider from the different sight where the host country should welcome the cultural variety brought by travellers. this issue has been discussed by many experts and I will deliver it in coming parapgraphs.
Beginning with those who accept the notion about following the indigenous culture when the visitor go there, considering some reasons, first of all, with this way, the travellers can adapt with strange-local culture faster. They can be easier to make out the art living of the local folks and then, wisely being a respectful person. Second of all, this point being a key statement, that is as a mean to avoid the conflict. Some experts mention that the greatest way to tackle the missed-related cross-cultural is by becoming a part of them.
Regarding with the other view about this issue, they think that the host area should be a high-open-minded party who welcoming a wide-range of cultural diversity that exist around the globe. There some arguments, one of them is, the respectful-manner of the local people will generate their own positive image. It can be a high-valuable attractive reson why travellers come there and spend their money into local tourism. The next reason is, the new culture become a chance to strengthen their own identity using the principle, "root locally, act globally". The latest arguments is, the local government must understand the cultural diversity where not every kind of visitors can be unified with the indigenous people and their behavior. It may take a long time to make it true.
To summarise the above two-side reasons, I think that welcoming the different cultural is wiser manner. There are too much dissimilar things in this world that we must be aware of in order to keep it alive in harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80023986496 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1519598156 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261059303425 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805826777232 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797162425824 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162493666657 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104944111855 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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