The charts below show the percentage of water used for six areas of the world.
The given pie charts give information about the rate of the usage of water for three different aims in six regions of the world.
Overall, it can be seen that a high number of the world given tend to utilise water resources for agricultural sectors the most except for two areas of the world.
As for North America and Europe, these two regions use water for industrial purposes mainly. Europe takes advantage of just over a half of them, while North American use more or less 48%. In light of the agricultural sectors, North America spend a little bit higher than Europe at nearly 40% and almost a third respectively. For domestic use, however, they ranged from 13% and 15% in these areas only, which are the lowest figures.
When it comes to the remained four areas of the world, the general trends of water usages are shown to the similar patterns. All of them require water for the use of agriculture the most significantly. In particular, in central Asia, the data for it is 88%, which is the highest among the given continents. Another striking feature is that South America engages in more using water for domestic aims with 19% compared to the others, which ranged from just 7% to 9%. On the other hand, in industrial uses, water usages had only a little less percentage of 12% in these places around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...cultural sectors, North America spend a little bit higher than Europe at nearly 40% and al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while, as for, except for, in particular, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67234042553 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.391648363 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9548240711 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380127578624 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138865264694 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771214052504 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234679526955 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418900892127 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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