The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

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The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The chart elucidated the comparison of the most activities which was made happiness between people under 30 years age and over 30 years age. Overall, achievement at work and doing hobbies are the most and the second factors which it was made people each years old categories feel happy, reached more than 30% in achievement at work and 20% in doing hobbies respectively. On the other hand, other factors is the uppermost percentage of happiness factor.

Furthermore, the different happiness factors in each people years old categories occurred in the third and forth percentages. In people under 30 years old categories, good appearance was positioned as the third percentages which it was made them feel happy, gained 18%. On the other hand, people over 30 years old assigned financial security as the third rank which it reached 14%.

Finally, while traveling was assigned as the fourth activity which it was made people under 30 years old feel happy, the fourth rank in people over 30 years old is being with family.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58609160161 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450292397661 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8867054542 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119147589938 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674049096319 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041914159992 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912977515448 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200874466715 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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