The table below gives information about UK independent films.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about UK independent films.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the rank of independent films which it released in the UK and Republic of Ireland by genre 2012. The rank was measured by three indicators, i.e, the number of releases, the percentage of all releases, as well as the percentage of income from ticket sales. Overall, comedy is the most independent films genre of the year while the romance is the lowest.

On the other hand, horror genre is the second rank as caused it had successful to release 14 independent films at the time, contributed 9.5% of all releases, as well as it earned up to 20% of income from ticket sales. Furthermore, the fantastic genre is Biopic that was positioned as the third rank. Even though it just released 1 independent films at that year, and it just contributed 0.7% of all releases, albeit it had successful to 9.1% of income from ticket sales.

In contrast, drama and documentary genres which them had successful to release 35 independent films and contributed 23.6% of all releases respectively, albeit they failed to contribute the highest percentage of income from ticket sales, while drama just reached 8.3% and documentary just gained 2.9%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'films'' or 'film's'?
Suggestion: films'; film's
...Overall, comedy is the most independent films genre of the year while the romance is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, second, third, well, while, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95360824742 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79128827856 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474226804124 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7075032822 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.285714286 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 5.23603664747 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0449466088743 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301969848221 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344297933327 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0370493240746 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022542273724 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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