The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided bar chart represents an overview of the production and consumption of electricity in top ten countries in 2014. The units are measured in kWH.
Overall, it is clearly seen that China and United States were highest amount of energy produced and consumed; whereas, Korea was least of position. The ratio of production and consumption was equilibrium in Russia and Korea, while Japan, India, France and Brazil produced higher electricity rather than consumed.
In 2014, China was a significant amount of electric energy consumed and produced compared to the other nine countries and it was almost 5,300 and 5,400 respectively. Subsequently, United States used and produced nearly 3,900 and 4,100 respectively.
On the other hand, Korea had lowest position in the production and consumption of electricity and ratio of both segments were equal and their were approximately 450; nonetheless, similar ratio followed by Russia and it was 1,050. In contrast, production of electric energy was higher compared to consumption in Japan, Brazil, India and France; it was nearly 940, 530, 875 and 565 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: were the highest
...early seen that China and United States were highest amount of energy produced and consumed;...
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... a significant amount of electric energy consumed and produced compared to the ot...
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...spectively. On the other hand, Korea had lowest position in the production and consumpt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40571428571 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94136439256 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4153126376 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150132691736 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776704272458 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988394456434 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120180260313 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940921047058 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.