Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. SOme people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
In the global era, most of the developing countries in the world are ambitious for doing plenty research on space and astronomy. One important aspect of this reality is many developing countries should spend plethora of their money for paying this research. The issue is whether this research are giving more positive impact for proving their prosperity or not?. In my view, I agree that a country should allocate their money a bunch for space research. I hold this view for some reasons which are set out below.
To begin with, I would like to argue that astronomical issue are not really important for the society today. There are some issues that all of governments in the world should prioritize to solve them than concern to space research, such as the escalation of inequality, unemployment, as well as homeless which occurred in numerous countries in the world. Allan S. Neir, the Director of research Centre for development Studies stated that 300.000.000 dollars of US which it utilized for space research are enabling for reducing 50.000 homeless in its regions.
Moreover, the amount of space research which it provided by some developing countries also alleged enable to fund some strategic infrastructures which it related to escalate their economic interests, such as establishing new transportation vehicles and ways which it could accelerate export import over countries faster than before.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe to agree to the statement and research on space should be replaced by some strategic research which it relate to decrease the number of inequality, unemployment, and homeless in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'relates'?
Suggestion: relates
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, really, so, well, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86195236681 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8881766281 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174888748721 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759117284666 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533948117632 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118775727056 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392735090853 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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