Many people claim that money should be spent on improving the standard of living of the people rather spending it for the space researches. I agree that it is justifiable to spend money on space studies.
First of all, researches conducted on space has led to various inventions in the field of science. Nowadays, a lot of problems arised due to over-population. Therefore, the astronauts are able to find the non-earth planets that could accommodate some population. Besides, valuable resources are found out from other planets through these researches.
Apart from searching shelters for the future generations, space programmes also contribute to well-being of the Earth in all aspects. For instance, monitoring the ozone hole, global warming and other environmental issues, helped people to solve the crisis and recover themselves from environmental threats and thereby improve their quality of life. Thus, space research provides an opportunity for the scientists to make new discoveries in a variety of areas like agriculture.
To conclude, Millions of dollars can be spent on space researches. The main reason for this is that it reduces the population problems. Secondly, it helps the scientists to do new discoveries in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iable to spend money on space studies. First of all, researches conducted on sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0485702235 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5006385649 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9166666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298473625703 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098037487854 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113904430141 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180239533656 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118780615712 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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