The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008

The graph provides information about changes in the amount of wastes collected through three selected methods of waste disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008.

According to the graph, most of the wastes were disposed by landfill method in 2005 while, the amount of waste burned were less in 2008. Approximately, two thousand million tonnes of wastes were discarded by landfill method in 2005, whereas the figure showed a successive
significant fall by 400 million tonnes in 2006 and 2008 respectively.

Although the amount of waste burned were nine hundred million tonnes in 2005, it increased slightly to one thousand two hundred million tonnes in 2006, furthur decreasing dramatically to nine hundred million tonnes in 2008. However, the wastes dumped in sea have been successively increased by two hundred million tonnes in 2006 and 2008 from 1200 million tonnes in 2005.

To sum up, the amount of wastes disposed by landfilling showed a significant drop during the period while, the figure for dumping method rose considerably. At the same time, burning method showed a mild fluctuation during the given years.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., whereas the figure showed a successive significant fall by 400 million tonnes i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26373626374 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67225092554 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3843760083 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326970955989 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174069150571 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123342639169 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194971931501 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136046256308 0.0819641961636 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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