Many people claim that the youngsters should work without being paid for the betterment of the community. I strongly disagree to this idea that the youngsters should work for the community without any payment.
First of all, the most important factor that motivates the young adults to do their job efficiently is the remuneration. Therefore, they feel demotivated when they are asked to work without wages. Moreover, they feel less interested in whatever the do while they work. Thus, it can also affect the growth of the community. For instance, a person who is unpaid shows less sincerity towards his job when he works in a company which provides lot of job responsibilities.
Secondly, it is the responsibility of the young people to earn something for their livelihood. Apart from that, they should support their family and society with their wages. Thus, they could improve their standard of living and economic growth of the community. In addition to this, if they are unpaid, it would distract young people from their original life goals and bring imbalance in their life activities.
To conclude, the youngsters should be paid for their job for the good of the community. The main reason for this is that remuneration gives a sense of satisfaction to them. Besides, being paid encourages the youth in attaining their original life goals.
- The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008 87
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., they feel less interested in whatever the do while they work. Thus, it can also affe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08071748879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76577300073 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0082404524 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195311516416 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711181029086 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587440883737 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116914984858 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527181021265 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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