The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how poeple think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Write a report for a university lecturer, desbcribing the information shown below.
The charts give information about adult literacy. The first one give explanations of grown-ups' decisions to take courses.The pie chart expresses people's perspectives of how the costs of adult education should be divided.
Looking from an overall perspective, the majority of adults took courses because of their liking for the subjects.And the costs of courses should be principally funded by learners themselves.
In the first chart, 40% was the figure for group of adults taking courses for interest.Came second in the chart is people whose desiration is to obtain high qualifications this group accounted for 38%, just 2% fewer than that of the afore-mentioned group.Ranging from 20 to 22% are leaners engaging courses for being handy for theirs running jobs , improving prospects of promotion or enjoying studying.Other reasons which are to be able to chang their field of work , to meet strangers are 12% and 9% respectively.
Regarding the costs of courses.Individuals are main benefactors of the courses, Paying for 40% of the total. Employers also have their responsibilty for about 35%. One-fourth of the total charge is paid by taxpayers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pects of promotion or enjoying studying.Other reasons which are to be able to chang t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34806629834 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2717777806 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 153.942210201 43.030603864 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260231341869 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115234423252 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930661732982 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154806240104 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100775626298 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.