The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate how the temperature and rainfall in both Equatorial and Mediterranean climates changed during 12 months in a year.
In general, what stands out form the chart is that the amount of rainfall in Equatorial from February to October were nearly the same. In the meantime, it is clear to see that the amount of rainfall in Mediterranean in 12 months fluctuated significantly.
In Equatorial, the temperature over a period of 12 months nearly remained stable. The highest temperature was around 27°C in May, and the lowest one was slower slightly, at 24°C in December and January. A reverse trend could be seen in the temperature in Mediterranean. While the highest temperature was 28°C in both December and January, which was at least two times as high as the lowest one, at 10°C in August.
The amount of rainfall in Equatorial fluctuated from under well 200 Cu mm in June to 275 Cu mm in December. Meanwhile, there were 7 months between April and October in Mediterranean which the amount of rainfall were lower than 50 Cu mm. The highest amount of rainfall was 175 Cu mm.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in 12 months fluctuated significantly. In Equatorial, the temperature over a peri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, well, while, at least, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92236931862 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6355812338 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165640565036 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764267103154 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661729208092 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126856258133 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807182425563 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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