The charts below show the two genres of tv programmes who watching by men, women and four age groups in Australia.
The two bar graphs illustrate the information in terms of percentage about Australian males, females and four various age groups who used to watch two several kinds of television shows named reality shows and game shows in one specific region with the passage of time.
Overall, it is vivid that over 45 aged people is maximum for watching both types of programmes, whereas least is seen by young ones.
With regards to the bar graphs, it can be clearly seen from the information that people who belong to age 45+ attains highest figure for watching given two genres of television programmes which accounted from three-quarters to seven in tens followed by women with 70% and 60% in one particular nation. Furthermore, the proportion of teenagers for same purpose remains constant with a half in Australia in given span of time.
The charts further depict that Australian youngsters who between 25-34 accounted over a third for watching game shows and experienced a little less than two-fold to six in ten to see another genre of television programmes. Moreover, disparity of 10% can be observed in men’s percentum for watching both kinds of shows. Lastly, mature adults (35-44) is found 70% and 40% respectively for seeing reality shows and game shows in Australia over the periods.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The charts below show the two genres of tv programmes who watching by men women and four age groups in Australia 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'attains the highest'.
Suggestion: attains the highest
...ation that people who belong to age 45+ attains highest figure for watching given two genres of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04205607477 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67644444705 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6247756637 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.142857143 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315038544055 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124715596723 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715088035414 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170136173998 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698087683952 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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