Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this? Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is considered by majority of people who it is primary duty of pro creators to educate their offsprings how to become good members of communities,whilst others deems that it is responsibility of educational centres. However, this essay will shed light on both the perceptions along with my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.
One school of thought claims that progenitors are responsible to teach pupils how to be good citizens because they are role models of their children. Due to these, children blindly follow them without asking any single question to them as they fit this image deeply in their minds that their parents do not do anything wrong. The fact is that, kids do same things which they seen done by their pro creators. So in this case, it has become need of the hour that progenitors make it mandatory that they show respect towards their elders, obey rules, following their traditions and cultures in the front of their offsprings. For example, if fathers and mothers are going anywhere out from their homes with their children by cars than make it compulsory to follow all the traffic rules in better ways. As a result, it would be definitely thrown impact on their offsprings and the will also doing anything by following rules and regulations in their upcoming periods. Thus, it should be taught by progenitors to offsprings.
The another school of thought ponder that schools play an essential role in the development of learners that is why educational centres are well teach students how to be become good members of by using various teaching methods. Firstly, it is duty of schools to educate the lessons of unity to tutees so they divided class into groups as well as give them work to do in groups which lead to learn them responsibilities, punctuality, care of others members as well. Furthermore, if educational centres will start celebrating couples of festivals related to various cultures in their schools than these not only assist students to gain knowledge about other cultures but also give respect them with the passage of time. Also, tutees learn vast number of rules, law and regulations in their school times from tutors rather than others. For instance, a survey conducted by local media reported that 95% law, rules and regulations are taught to students by educational centres. Thus, it is duty of schools to educate students about society rules and make them good citizens.
In my prospective, they both progenitors and schools play equal role as well as responsibility to teach children about how to become good members of communities because they both are well-known about the weakest and strongest points about pupils. Additionally, children can learn respect, love,care and etcetera from parents. On the other hand, discipline, rules, responsibility taught to them by educational centres. So it is right to said that joint efforts are required from pro creators and educational centres as no single flower cannot bloom the garden.
To recapitulate, although, parents are crucial to enhance the development of their offsprings and responsible to educate them about societies’s rules and regulations,yet the importance of schools can be neglected as these are the places where students prepare themselves to become better natives, give participants into progressing of regions and making their upcoming periods bright.
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- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ators to educate their offsprings how to become good members of communities,whils...
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Suggestion: , whilst
...w to become good members of communities,whilst others deems that it is responsibility ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...hat is why educational centres are well teach students how to be become good members ...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to respect'
Suggestion: to respect
...upils. Additionally, children can learn respect, love,care and etcetera from parents. O...
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Suggestion: , care
...onally, children can learn respect, love,care and etcetera from parents. On the other...
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Suggestion: , yet
... about societies’s rules and regulations,yet the importance of schools can be neglec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 41.998997996 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2836.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 548.0 315.596192385 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17518248175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86506810911 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45802919708 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 506.74238477 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7254623659 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20140462132 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674520862214 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051175741056 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122124934951 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241446230177 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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