The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In this report , I'm going to describe two bar graphs . Both graph depicts the activity of UK students after they did bachelors or Masters program in 2008. It is clear from the graph , both types students opted for higher studies.

In 2008 , those students who had done bachelor in the UK , were interested in different activities. About half of the total students, were looked to get higher studies in the UK . These numbers were Sharply rose to 29, 665 . After did graduation , just quarter passes seventeen thousand students were involved in part time job. Large number of students were also unemployed and some number of students opted to do voluntary work
Most of the students opted to did PHD after they did masters,just quarter passed twenty five thousand of students were likely to did Part time work . Half of the students were unemployed and small numbers were interested in Voluntary work.

In conclusion, majority of the students who did bachelor, were more likely to did master and those students who did master , were get involved in doing PHD.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'bachelor'
Suggestion: bachelor
... activity of UK students after they did bachelors or Masters program in 2008. It is clear...
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...gram in 2008. It is clear from the graph , both types students opted for higher st...
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...nts opted for higher studies. In 2008 , those students who had done bachelor in...
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...students who had done bachelor in the UK , were interested in different activities...
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...ities. About half of the total students, were looked to get higher studies in the...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e looked to get higher studies in the UK . These numbers were Sharply rose to 29, ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... in the UK . These numbers were Sharply rose to 29, 665 . After did graduation , jus...
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...ese numbers were Sharply rose to 29, 665 . After did graduation , just quarter pas...
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...y rose to 29, 665 . After did graduation , just quarter passes seventeen thousand ...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...teen thousand students were involved in part time job. Large number of students were also...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'master'
Suggestion: master
...tudents opted to did PHD after they did masters,just quarter passed twenty five thousan...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... opted to did PHD after they did masters,just quarter passed twenty five thousand of ...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: Part-time
...thousand of students were likely to did Part time work . Half of the students were unempl...
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...udents were likely to did Part time work . Half of the students were unemployed an...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ted in Voluntary work. In conclusion, majority of the students who did bachelo...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...jority of the students who did bachelor, were more likely to did master and those...
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Line 6, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...master and those students who did master , were get involved in doing PHD.
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ter and those students who did master , were get involved in doing PHD.
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...nd those students who did master , were get involved in doing PHD.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93258426966 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50151606362 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8946394663 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238051937047 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102438677696 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708758817181 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169184874787 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206794691239 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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