The charts indicate the proportion of money that people in France, Germany and England
spent on food and other products in 1998 and 2008.
The given bar charts indicate the proportion of money that people in France, Germany and England
spent on food and other products in 1998 and 2008.
Overall, it can be seen that all three countries saw significant increases in the proportion of purchases of
both food and other goods over the examined period.
In 1998, approximately 15% and 10% of the money French citizens spent was on foodstuffs and other
goods, respectively. After 10 years, figures for both categories dramatically climbed to 40%. In Germany,
there was a mild increase of 5% of the money spent on food, at 25% in 1998, and 30% in 2008. The figures
for money spent on other goods were approximately 5% lower during the same years.
In England however, buyers spent only 10% on food in 1998 and 15% in 2008. Meanwhile, the figures for
money spent on other goods experienced a surge from about 8% in 1998 to 35% in 2008.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Spent
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...% in 2008. Meanwhile, the figures for money spent on other goods experienced a surg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78481012658 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58702870359 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.207356306 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414894024863 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196017367985 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205689530039 0.0843802449381 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178966858249 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139395209126 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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