The charts show the distribution of employment among agriculture, industry (CN) and services in three countries in 1980 and 2020.
The bar charts compare three different nations in terms of the number of people employed in three major sectors - agriculture, industry and services in 1980 and with a projection to 2020.
Overall, it is clear that the figures for services are much higher than those for agriculture and industry for countries A and C, whereas agriculture was the main employment sector in country B.
In 1980, agriculture accounted for the highest rate (about 65%) in country B, compared to 20% and 5% in countries A and C respectively. By contrast, the figure for services during the same period s was higher in country A at 45%, and it was the highest in country C at around 70%. Meanwhile, only 25% of the workforce were employed in the services, which is significantly lower than in the other two countries. Moreover, the percentage of those employed in industry was below 40% in the three given nations in that year.
Looking into the future, the proportion of those employed in services rate is predicted to rise in all three countries. In A and C, it is forecast to increase moderately and should reach around 58% and 80% respectively within 40 years. However, in country B, the percentage of those employed in the services sector is set to double from just over 20% in 1980 to more than 40% in 2020. In addition, it thought that 50% of workers in country B will will be employed in the agricultural sector by 2020, down from approximately 65% in 1980. Furthermore, while around 10% of people will still be working in agriculture in country A in 2020, a mere 1% or 2% of the workforce will be working in agriculture in country C. Finally, the percentage of people working in industry will drop slightly in countries A and C but will double in country B in 2020.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, still, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 33.7804878049 198% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64951768489 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81406605899 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450160771704 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5858149312 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339915439965 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136197589164 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879101416895 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235881504784 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850309263422 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.