The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period.
The four pie charts provide an overview of tourism variation in Australia and Germany in the year 1960 and 2010.
It can be seen that the majority of Australian and Germany citizens chose European countries as tourist destinations throughout the surveyed period. However, in 2010, Asia became the primary choice of Australian people in terms of travelling.
In 1960, both countries recorded a similar situation with respect to the proportion of tourists visiting Asian destinations, with 10% each. Meanwhile, over half of the Australian travellers decided to visit Europe, at 53%, which was well over twice as high as that for any other destinations. Interestingly, after 50 years, the proportion of Australian people coming to Asia saw a considerable increase of 53% to 63%.
With regard to German tourism, the percentage of tourists coming to the US as well as European countries varied slightly over the following period. Britain received fewer tourists from Germany in 2010, falling by 14% to 6%. By contrast, German tourism had seen a growing tendency in the proportion of people travelling to Asia, with a dramatic rise of 15% to 25% over the period shown.
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- The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 95
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- The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, well, while, as to, as well as, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14736842105 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88361499806 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5940591209 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196480356184 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753053435805 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592596582282 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114828020361 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428741940568 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.