The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The pie charts illustrate the outcome of a survey emphasizing the reasons for doing MBA, as well as the specialties of MBA graduates that employers value most.
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From an overall point of view, more than half of MBA graduates choose to accomplish this qualification in order to have better opportunities in their careers. Nevertheless, it is their personality and education that determines whether they sign up.
As is shown in the first chart, approximately two-thirds of MBA diplomates have this professional degree for the aforementioned reason. On the other hand, 12% and 15% of them doing MBA with the aim of enhancing themselves or their job performance, correspondingly. Merely 8% of these baccalaureates acquire MBA so that they may have the ability to help others.
As for the employer's perspective, personality and knowledge are two prerequisites when enrolling. According to the survey result, precisely a quarter of recruiters appreciate one of the above factors of the candidate. The second most valued determinants belong to the applicant's connections and appearance, with one-fifth of the employers thinking highly of these aspects. Then, it is interesting to note that only one out of ten companies treasure the qualifications of the job-seekers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...BA graduates that employers value most. . From an overall point of view, more th...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...e ability to help others. As for the employers perspective, personality and knowledge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41919191919 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40418789728 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1626707644 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.3 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186480597836 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674485036009 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565419006079 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116442156996 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560261415136 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.