The charts shows percentage of water use in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts shows percentage of water use in six areas of the world.

The pie charts compare the proportion of water used for industrial, agricultural and domestic activities in six regions of the globe.

Overall, most region uses larger proportion of their water supply for agricultural activities while industrial and domestic activities used up less amount of water.

In Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America, larger percentage of water is used for Agricultural purposes with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. This is in contrast to North America and Europe where larger portion of their water is use for industrial purpose and agricultural activities uses lesser portion of water; 39% in North America and 32% in Europe.

Water used for domestic activities follow similar pattern across the six regions with South America having the highest of 19% and Central Asia and South East Asia having the least with 7% each. Also, industrial activities in all regions except North America and Europe uses up the least percentage of water supply although this exceeds water used for domestic purpose in South East Asia by 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entage of water is used for Agricultural purposes with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23699421965 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60295377827 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456647398844 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.5392790658 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244931822495 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159581465217 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454356923136 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185558558248 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311399668764 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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