choosing the different kinds of accommodation

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choosing the different kinds of accommodation

The bar chart compares four countries in terms of tourists choosing the different kinds of accommodation when they had a vacation in year 2012.

Overall, the hotel was the most accommodation chosen in nations. Additionally, the quantity of people in Northern Ireland selecting Caravan was higher than those of other countries.

The percentage of visitors choosing hotel in England was highest, around 55%, while the figure for Northern Ireland was slightly lower, approximately 45%. However, the proportion of travelers choosing for Caravan in Northern Ireland was nearly six-fold higher than in England. By contrast, people who cooked for themselves made up about 28% and roughly 12 % in England and Northern Ireland respectively. Meanwhile, both nations had the same figure for Camping.

Turning to the remaining countries, more tourists in Scotland stayed in hotel than Wales, with over 50% and nearly 49% respectively. While the percentage of travelers in Scotland chose Camping was lowest in two nations, just over 5%, the figure for holidaymakers who made a choice for Caravan in Wales was lower than that of Scotland, roughly 9%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to camp'.
Suggestion: To camp
...rcentage of travelers in Scotland chose Camping was lowest in two nations, just over 5%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40782122905 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142932427 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1437047229 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141990499337 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670883307859 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112597567224 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120148378296 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144460131112 0.0819641961636 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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