The climograph below shows the average month my temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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The climograph below shows the average month my temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The given climatic chart reveal the number of temperature and precipitation in Kolkata during a period of time. The data is calibrated in celcius and mm which is clearly and coherently represented.

Overall, it is noticeable that the monthly figure of precipitation in Kolkata stable moderatly while the downpole take high percent in the middle of the year.

It can be seen that the rain was 50 mm in the first quarter. Moreover, in the case of may, June, and July it had been 100mm, 250 mm, and 330 mm respectively. In addition to this , in the month of September it had decrease as compare to August . After that in the month of October it was steadily decreased whereas in the trend of November and December it was negligible.

As far as trend was concerned the Kolkata temperature stands the coolest condition in the beginning year. After that it show the temperature in the fluctuated way . The figures levelling - off in the average of 25 degrees before gradual fall to nearly 20 degrees in the end of the year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e and precipitation in Kolkata during a period of time. The data is calibrated in celcius and ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...330 mm respectively. In addition to this , in the month of September it had decrea...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ber it had decrease as compare to August . After that in the month of October it w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ber and December it was negligible. As far as trend was concerned the Kolkata ...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oolest condition in the beginning year. After that it show the temperature in the flu...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ow the temperature in the fluctuated way . The figures levelling - off in the aver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71508379888 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78496665985 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9387283757 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163685304478 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617939660958 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053223580148 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923256501886 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410108232635 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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