The graph compares rate of temperature and precipitation over the period of an year in Kolkata. The calibration of data for temperature is presented in millimeter alternatively for precipitation is shown in centigrade.
Overall, the maximum rate of rainfall is in the months of July and august whereas for temperature is in April and may. Similarly the lowest figure for temperature is in January and the same repeated by the last month while the rainfall is lowest during January and December.
To begin with, the commencement of rainfall is in January of 10 mm and it got continued till may by 10 times of the initial with moderate fluctuations. Following which, it got a drastic rose to 250 mm along with again it experienced a significant increase to 340 mm in July which stood in the peak than compared to another months. However, the number got declined dramatically to 4 mm including other months with moderate up's and down's.
On the other hand, the temperature was begun with 200 degree centigrade in first month. Furthermore, it inclined sharply to 320 degree centigrade till may and it is the maximum temperature faced than other attributes. Moreover, the count of temperature got decreased moderately and reached 200 degree centigrade by the end of the year.
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...re and precipitation over the period of an year in Kolkata. The calibration of dat...
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...recipitation is shown in centigrade. Overall, the maximum rate of rainfall is...
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...as for temperature is in April and may. Similarly the lowest figure for temperature is in...
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... months with moderate ups and downs. On the other hand, the temperature was b...
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...ure was begun with 200 degree centigrade in first month. Furthermore, it inclined...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, whereas, while, as for, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00469483568 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04768974682 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516431924883 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8059694844 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110385044221 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510309962274 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327150387714 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717225121077 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352014261603 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.