It is undeniable that people loves to look younger than their actual age. There are several cases for trying this and it may leads to damage of individual as well as society. It shows clearly that it is not acceptable for people to such things which harms to them.
To begin with, public are more fascinated by their style, good looking rather than their health. To probe further, many persons are getting encouraged by film actors or with those having trendy style along with charming face. As a result, they try to use different techniques to look alike despite of their age and health condition. For instance, in these new era, many film actors faced numerous health issues for using dangerous cosmetics also doing exercises that doesn't fit to their body. This depicts precisely not to try such things which are unsafe to one's health.
On the other hand, some people feels shame to look older than others. For this, they uses few products which are used by people who looks than their age. There are separate cases for some of them based on their genes or body condition. These folks will never exposes like older besides their present age. For example, famous film actor Nagarjuna never shows his age with his oldness. However, he looks like young boy. This is by maintaining healthy diet along with proper exercise. It represents that age doesn't matter if regular care was taken. People need to improve their wisdom and maturity with their growing age which leads to successful life.
To conclude, age was not the factor need to be considered for our pride. Moreover, everyone have to grow up their thinking ability as well as positive attitude by their rising life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...age of individual as well as society. It shows clearly that it is not acceptable ...
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...it to their body. This depicts precisely not to try such things which are unsafe ...
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...For example, famous film actor Nagarjuna never shows his age with his oldness. Ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81660899654 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15841527061 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6912167694 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2631578947 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338232391722 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101911087278 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719451120132 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203077251182 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783921221197 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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