Companies use advertisements to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an Many advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or a bad thing to the society?
Organization makes several advertisements to enhance the sales quality and it has number of reasons which helps to advertisements to make it effective. While, I believe that advertisement is the best way to convey the complete message of any product within a short time.
To begin with, I would like to outline the advantages of advertisements that eventually are far beneficial for launching any products which is the shorter and best way to communicate people through different advertisement resources for instance, commercials, print media, radio, bill boards, messaging, e-marketing and many social media advertisements. One of the obvious advantages of T.v Commercials and social media is people get attract by visual advertisements, as well as it is also easily understandable for deaf and dumb who can only understand by visual effects. Furthermore, advertisement plays most imperative roles in today's world which also shows the literacy rate of the country to some extent, along with this mostly people prefer to watch product commercials instead of reading complete description of product, because, visual communication is the most effective way to deliver message to all people in same and short time.
On the other hand, it has many adverse consequences of advertisement that creates negative perception among the people specially between children’s for example, adult product's advertisements creates negative thoughts between children before the time, not to deliver product quality according to marketing and many others. Moreover, many adepts assert that print media need to be banned owing excessive use and mass production that ultimately effects on green environment.
To conclusion, advertisement is more essential tool to convey the message, whereas, few of things are dangerous which need be controlled by the government, as well as government ought to set rules and form the criteria of advertisements accordingly.
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| 2019-05-18 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to advertisements to make it effective. While, I believe that advertisement is the be...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...criteria of advertisements accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61694915254 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2730669926 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 283.868780488 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.996942884 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.125 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.875 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.875 5.23603664747 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199240150384 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939363702434 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619428969228 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135685670286 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446335769003 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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