Doctors in many countries concerned that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What causes this? How this can be solved?
Many doctors assert that physical exercise is no longer a part of people's life in several countries. I, however, believe that people have been engaged in many activities as compare to past due to busy life schedule, which becomes the reason of many adverse consequences for health but, there are plenty of way to resolve this matter.
Nowadays, it can be seen that people are quite involved in many problems and owing to fast paced world every individual person is trying to get achievements. Whereas, survey depicts that number of people spend their ample of time in office due to work over load that eventually is less fair for their health and social lives, along with these in third world countries mostly people does couple of jobs or complete their studies along with job due to inadequacy of money that actually demonstrate their life styles how they struggle. Moreover, rest of the children and young age people are engaged with different activities that actually stop them to do exercise for instance, excessive use of games and social media, watching movies and addicted of different gadgets.
Furthermore, in order to streamline the situation of this worrying trend government need to implement sanctions on those industries that bridges the state laws and take extra time and work from employees which impacts on their social lives. Moreover, government need to provide different parks and sports ground around the country for those who are keen to do but unavailability of place they are so far from exercise. At last, some pedagogical experts concern that physical exercise is the key to keep healthy and smart as well as spend more life relatively others.
To sum up, it is the responsibility of government to provide places to the people as well as look an eye on these issues that actually will be worthwhile for future generation to some extent.
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| 2019-07-03 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, third, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99041533546 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58409776699 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8042121318 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.555555556 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7777777778 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 5.23603664747 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205379505782 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07994787899 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467042895652 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109278542024 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467164601023 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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