Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that cutting-edge computers are the key area of prior technological invention of the last century. I completely agree that computers broaden a crucial key in worldwide.
The computer is probably the most essential piece of equipment, we rely on it for almost everything. It is clear that computer definitely helps people's life become easier in work by email, writitng reports, organising data, and finding information on the Internet. Perhaps workers are a great example of this, who easily look for the various sources of information on Google and reduce a calculation time by using app to do writing reports, called PowerPoint. Besides that communications from far away are to interact, for instance, business, the computer is such a useful tool for communication between employees with different offices or different countries. Technological advances are altering all human society.
Not only computers but also other electronic breakthroughs have being formulated, such as dishwasher, transport revolution and smartphones. However, I still assert that computer transcends others, which seems to be incarnation as the brain. It is able to storage everything from mere details or over that is a thing people can not possess, so without its brain, scientists are quite hard to invent the electronic machines. They also leads to get better living conditions for human, whenever a new technology is introduced then jobs might be created. For example, there would be no computer programmers if the computer had not been invented. People says it seems to be a series of state-of-the-art technology.
In conclusion, I believe that the computer is unique and prior in revolution from the last hundred years to achieve better living situation nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...vent the electronic machines. They also leads to get better living conditions for hum...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f-the-art technology. In conclusion, i believe that computer is unique and pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40363636364 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12838035353 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0767438794 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199485021514 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062780883979 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338586651156 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116062289229 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0091818916265 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 40.7170731707 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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