Consumption of Spreads
The line graph gives information on the comparison of three different kinds of Spreads which has been consumed over period given form 1991 to 2007. Generally speaking, the consumption of butter and margarine decreased over this period of time, while it rose, for fat low and reduced spreads. At the beginning, butter was more popular but after 1991, margarine used more till 2001 when low fat and reduced spreads grasped the first rank of consumption among three types.
It is explicitly observed that the amount of using butter began at around 140 grams and then picked at 160 grams in 1986 and then declined sharply. Similarly, margarine was eaten around 90 grams at the beginning and after a little fluctuation dropped to 40 grams at the end of the period.
on the other hand, low fat and reduced spreads started to use in 1996 with the amount of 10 grams approximately and increased dramatically till 2001 when it reached the pick at more than 80 grams and then moderately fall to 70 grams at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...utter and margarine decreased over this period of time, while it rose, for fat low and reduced...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and reduced spreads. At the beginning, butter was more popular but after 1991, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... 40 grams at the end of the period. on the other hand, low fat and reduced sp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd of the period. on the other hand, low fat and reduced spreads started to u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely and increased dramatically till 2001 when it reached the pick at more than 80...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73184357542 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49522498949 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5182967151 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14509553618 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769050008465 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06777837345 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096318106064 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946230879395 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.