cycle of water
The diagram illustrates the cycle of water, the transformation in the state of water and the conditions affect on the water cycle.
There are three stages in the process that the state of water is created and converts into other shapes, become with evaporation from the ocean and eventually it runs back into the ocean again.
At the beginning of the process, the water of the ocean evaporates to form water vapour and the Ocean contributes over 80 percent of total water vapour in the air. Afterward, the water vapour condenses gradually into the fog and the cloud is formed. When it accumulates enough quantity, the precipitations fall down to the ground.
At the end of the process, the rainwater creates snow mountains and lakes that depend on situations, place and weather condition. There are two ways of water going back to the ocean. First, the water runoff on the surface of the ground is best well-know but in additional, the water from lakes or on the surface of the ground percolates down through the layers until it meets impervious layers and form the groundwater to run back into the ocean.
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| 2019-09-06 | Thang Nguyen Duc | 73 | view |
| 2014-06-26 | eddysuaib | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...n the state of water and the conditions affect on the water cycle. There are three stage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80628272251 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60217324772 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502617801047 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2056023646 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38049704923 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172046951292 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173854808729 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2655498607 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189546991891 0.0819641961636 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.